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    dots Submission Name: The Good Lifedots
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    Author: Ontlogicalamity
    ASL Info:    33/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    4.67 - 190/194/45
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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       Threw this together while waiting for my roommate to get out of the shower. I could go on forever, and maybe I would if I thought it was worthwhile. What do you think?


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    dotsThe Good Lifedots
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    Taking data, writing papers
    Organizing evil capers
    Running miles, taking showers
    Sleeping in for extra hours
    Doing laundry, choosing outfits
    Trying hard to put on the ritz
    Paying bills with parents' money
    Drinking tea with milk and honey
    Thinking terms in formal logic
    Teaching children mathematics
    Ripping flicks of Futurama
    Burning them to CD-ROM-a
    Listening to MP3's
    Barely avoiding STD's
    Prepping hard for real life's barrage
    Oh why can't I stay in college?




    Submitted on 2004-10-15 06:33:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this a really great and exciting poem.don't resist change but don't cash in your chips too soon.you really have something there and i think that you can do amazing things in or out of college.good luck and fare well.
    | Posted on 2004-10-15 00:00:00 | by sickly | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey i really liked this peace. The rhyme scheme may always work but you don't care and nor do i. Its fun to read and by leaving it imperfect i think contains some meaning. WEll done for a good read.
    | Posted on 2004-10-15 00:00:00 | by HaAtzmah | [ Reply to This ]
      hey. i REALLY like this, but...

    Thinking terms in formal logic
    Teaching children mathematics

    youre rhyme skips there. other wise its beautiful. and real life is NOT that bad. promise.
    | Posted on 2004-10-15 00:00:00 | by Printer Shock | [ Reply to This ]
      very lively piece you have here, I loved the energy and the constant flow of daily life within, but to answer your question as to why you can't stay in college, you're too hyper, lmao. college isn't for everyone at least not until they experience life and then settle down to start learning new things, for now just concentrate on enjoying lifes constant party...Bob:)
    | Posted on 2004-10-15 00:00:00 | by poetryman | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw, I wish I was back in college because I loved it! Sadly, the real world isn't quite as fun, but hey you can still drink beer. You can even have it on Froot Loops if that'll bring back memories.
    | Posted on 2004-10-15 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


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