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    dots Submission Name: Gay is the daydots

    Author: Vibrant
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 855/538/131
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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       Gay- meaning happy....(please keep that in mind..)

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    dotsGay is the daydots

    Am gay, as a sunshiny day.
    How the gray has wiped away
    and clouded my straight lined way.
    Happy is me, happy is he.
    So open the windows, and shout out
    the day.
    Be happy
    Be gay
    Let the sunshine in your way.
    Sing in
    Sing out
    Let your happiness spread about.
    Bring forth a new,
    and spit out the rain.
    Be happy for a change,
    let go of the drip.
    Get up and be gay,
    even if just for one day.

    Submitted on 2004-10-15 10:44:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it, its very up-beat.. personally i dont write up-beat poems but i just had to comment haha the rhyme is great and i like to use it sometimes too. good job!
    | Posted on 2004-10-15 00:00:00 | by lonely sky | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, to be gay...some of these exact emotions I am feeling, but feel unworthy to exclaim that I am Gay(happy)...You worded it so well and I wouldn't change a thing...I like how your structure reflects how you feel...It is not in a particular form, just erratic as an emotion, coming forth in short bursts and drawn out verse...luvs it...B
    | Posted on 2004-10-15 00:00:00 | by bluepifany | [ Reply to This ]
      a great and positive poem that was simple to get into and out of.i don't have any more to say about it at this time.good luck and fare well.
    | Posted on 2004-10-15 00:00:00 | by sickly | [ Reply to This ]

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