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    dots Submission Name: The Melody Man[not so melodic]dots
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    Author: Damien Vladimir
    ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 122/89/35
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsThe Melody Man[not so melodic]dots
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    I enslave misery with guitar strings
    as i play, night and day,
    notes of sing-song rhytmning
    i maintain an amazing melody
    a key cavalry,of key thundering
    the retreat of metallic lightning

    the extreme metal scene
    is a timeless dream slip
    the horizon expansion,
    of riff, riffs,drifting

    the magnetic force of alter ego-maniacs
    brings about a vocal focus of enormous rage and fury trapped.




    Submitted on 2004-10-15 13:49:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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