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The Melody Man[not so melodic]


Author: Damien Vladimir
ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 122 /89 /35
Words: 65
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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The Melody Man[not so melodic]



I enslave misery with guitar strings
as i play, night and day,
notes of sing-song rhytmning
i maintain an amazing melody
a key cavalry,of key thundering
the retreat of metallic lightning

the extreme metal scene
is a timeless dream slip
the horizon expansion,
of riff, riffs,drifting

the magnetic force of alter ego-maniacs
brings about a vocal focus of enormous rage and fury trapped.




Submitted on 2004-10-15 13:49:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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