The Melody Man[not so melodic]

Author: Damien Vladimir ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 122 /89 /35 Words: 65

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The Melody Man[not so melodic]

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I enslave misery with guitar strings as i play, night and day, notes of sing-song rhytmning i maintain an amazing melody a key cavalry,of key thundering the retreat of metallic lightning the extreme metal scene is a timeless dream slip the horizon expansion, of riff, riffs,drifting the magnetic force of alter ego-maniacs brings about a vocal focus of enormous rage and fury trapped.

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