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    dots Submission Name: I need no wings to flydots
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    Author: winged_writer_robyn
    ASL Info:    16/f/wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 116/162/44
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 1195
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       i don't know why i wrote it. it's not that good. eh.


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    dotsI need no wings to flydots
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    I’ve been searching…
    Deeper and deeper, I have searched
    The depths of the sea,
    Trying myself to see what I might find.

    I’ve been reaching…
    Higher and higher, I have searched
    The highest mountains,
    Pushing to see how far I can climb.

    I will soar
    Amongst the heavenly clouds;
    Shine among the celestial bodies in the sky.
    I will reach the highest of highs,
    I will reach the ends of the earth,
    I will spread my arms, for I need no wings to fly.




    Submitted on 2004-10-17 12:14:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh, how cute. I really like this poem of yours. It reminds me of a lot of my dreams. In my dreams, I can fly oh so high and so fast if I want to. It's so much fun. In fact, the reason why I sleep so much is because I love to dream. I get many inspirations of what to write about next. I, also, get many visions as to what is going to happen and why. I'm a true blue visionary. Most of my dreams have psychic meanings behind them. Anyway, I really like this poem.
    | Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by Victoria | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it. It was very insperastional (If I spelled that wrong sue me)

    "I will reach the highest of highs,
    I will reach the ends of the earth,
    I will spread my arms, for I need no wings to fly."

    It's very hopefilled and gets the point across. Now this is just me but the word Celestial makes me giggle. (I have my reasons!)
    | Posted on 2004-10-17 00:00:00 | by Cigarette Smoke | [ Reply to This ]
      thats nice pal... its great to read happy poems.
    hope to read more of your stuff. and good luck for the future. seeya...
    | Posted on 2004-10-17 00:00:00 | by submarine | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the message, most of us who read this will see you as a happy person now.I like the way you wrote this, and I have to disagree with you, this was a nice peopm, and I liked it.I don't know why you don't like it.It was very inspirational like other's have probably already said.I liked the part:
    I've been searching...
    deeper, and deeper I have searched
    the depths of the sea
    trying myself to see what I might find...
    I know that this may sound stupid to you, but I think you just described how I've been feeling lately...Iike this, I hope u don't mind me adding it 2 my favs.
    camoflage
    | Posted on 2004-10-17 00:00:00 | by camoflage | [ Reply to This ]
      t his was really very deep. i had to re-read it twice. only to see if i was completely understanding it. and i think it was awesome how you portrayed your emotions. i liked the flow of it and everything.
    | Posted on 2004-10-17 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      Makes me think of the 'I belief I can fly" song... wonderfully free and magically flying without wings. This almost describes an out of body experience where you are flying freely through the sky and your spirit can soar without wings. Lovely writing.
    | Posted on 2004-10-17 00:00:00 | by Beulah | [ Reply to This ]


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