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    dots Submission Name: Endless Daysdots
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    Author: max
    ASL Info:    27 m tennessee
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 152/191/55
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsEndless Daysdots
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    Along an endless timeline of days
    our lives are based upon,
    and though, unknowingly, we stray into and beyond
    and into,
    the days,
    never cease to remain it seems

    caught up in the action of endless days
    life appears hazily, and unclear,
    and in the action I praise the question--
    "Since we appear to continually remain,
    what shall come to be?
    in the future?"

    Only more action perhaps?
    Action of endless days?

    And monotenous action it is--
    It appears to be monotenous, continual
    action of endless days,
    inside them.




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