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    dots Submission Name: I Love Ya!dots
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    Author: Timmy S. Edgar
    ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263/200/71
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1240
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    Description:
       This poem was written for everyone whom i call my friends which includes everyone on eliteskills


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    dotsI Love Ya!dots
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    … I love ya smile!
    … I love ya face!
    … I love ya nature!
    … I love ya grace!

    … A beautiful day it was
    When I met you
    Lightly scented breezes
    My touched memory of you

    … I love ya confidence!
    … I love ya laugh!
    I love ya near me…
    … On life’s long path!

    … These are my words
    from a heart that’s true
    You are my best friend
    And so I love you




    Submitted on 2004-03-06 23:59:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      aww how cute. i love the expression of friendship towards people you don't even know. what a nice guy you are. romantic and nice, yeah that is rare*
    | Posted on 2004-12-13 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
      From my heart which is pure i say with confidence it is true i cherish and value my friends and am a loyal and faithful mate to allthank you for your very kind comments
    | Posted on 2004-03-07 00:00:00 | by Timmy S. Edgar | [ Reply to This ]
      Thanks Timmy!! This one made me smile! Really liked this one. Even though it couldn't possibly be true, it feels true - it feels like you actually believe what you wrote!
    | Posted on 2004-03-07 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]


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