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I Love Ya!


Author: Timmy S. Edgar
ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263 /200 /71
Words: 86
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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This poem was written for everyone whom i call my friends which includes everyone on eliteskills


I Love Ya!



… I love ya smile!
… I love ya face!
… I love ya nature!
… I love ya grace!

… A beautiful day it was
When I met you
Lightly scented breezes
My touched memory of you

… I love ya confidence!
… I love ya laugh!
I love ya near me…
… On life’s long path!

… These are my words
from a heart that’s true
You are my best friend
And so I love you




Submitted on 2004-03-06 23:59:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  aww how cute. i love the expression of friendship towards people you don't even know. what a nice guy you are. romantic and nice, yeah that is rare*
| Posted on 2004-12-13 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
  From my heart which is pure i say with confidence it is true i cherish and value my friends and am a loyal and faithful mate to allthank you for your very kind comments
| Posted on 2004-03-07 00:00:00 | by Timmy S. Edgar | [ Reply to This ]
  Thanks Timmy!! This one made me smile! Really liked this one. Even though it couldn't possibly be true, it feels true - it feels like you actually believe what you wrote!
| Posted on 2004-03-07 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]


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