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    dots Submission Name: Dearest Of All My Enemiesdots
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    Author: Beast
    ASL Info:    24/ M/ Planet Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 232/133/28
    Words: 409
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Angry
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       A letter to an enemy of mine...


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    dotsDearest Of All My Enemiesdots
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    Dear Enemy,

    I am not really sure why am I writing this letter for you, but still I am writing it anyway. I think a "thank you" is in order, after all; I have learnt a lot from your animosity...you would be surprised when you know what a man can learn from his enemy!

    I have learnt not to trust anyone no matter how much I like them...and no matter how much I care for them, as trust is fatal. I have also learnt that if I have to trust, then I can always trust my enemy to act as an enemy but when in comes to friends you can never know how will they act. I can always trust my enemy to stab me in the back the moment he gets a chance, while I can never know what a friend will do when he gets a chance...

    I have learnt that I should have no mercy when it comes to retribution, since my enemies will have none when it comes to me. Its killed or be killed; No mercy.
    Still, a man should always respect his enemies, because if you despise them then youll underestimate them which is another fatal mistake.

    I have learnt that a man who got nothing to lose is a dead man walking, and you can NOT kill a dead man, so I always make sure that my enemy has something to lose while I have none. This is the key to being invincible.

    I have learnt that there are some things or actions that are not meant to be personal, these things or actions are usually done because of survival or even business, such as betrayal.

    Also I would like to let you know that I no longer hate you, since hate is considered an emotion which makes it personal while it isn't. Even when you look at me from the wrong end of the barrel just right before I put an end to your sorry existence, I want you to know that it won't be personal...


    "Pain is my pleasure, and fear is my game
    I want no money, and I seek no fame
    I still have a bullet with -on it- your name
    Run or hide, it is all the same
    Its time -for you- to die, its the end of the game"



    Yours Sincerely,
    "An Enemy of Yours"




    Submitted on 2004-10-18 16:05:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      thats cool. let go of trust. its hard. i tried.
    i like the quote at the end. and this letter was pretty true.


    "I have learnt that a man who got nothing to lose is a dead man walking, and you can NOT kill a dead man, so I always make sure that my enemy has something to lose while I have none. This is the key to being invincible"

    invincible. i like the way u look at that.(=


    | Posted on 2006-09-08 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      It's interesting peace, quite funny, but on the other side not so funny. You said that this is not serious but the fact that it could be serious even a little bit frightens me.
    But anyway I like it because you have imagination and you are thinking. I'm not sure that people do that often these days.
    Yours Sincerely
    Not “An Enemy of Yours”
    | Posted on 2004-10-18 00:00:00 | by Poly Jean | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, this one is weird, too weird, may be it's not serious like you said but it's full of hatred and anger. I liked the part that says "Also I’d like to let you know that I no longer hate you, since hate is considered an emotion which makes it personal while it’s not", but let me say this "If all that and it wasn't personal, then what will happen when it is personal??!"
    | Posted on 2004-10-20 00:00:00 | by Yousef | [ Reply to This ]
       How fun! There are so many good thoughts in this one. I think everyone needs an enemy to write a letter to. I think I'll start dictating one right now - I just hope it's as good as yours. Heck, even if it's not I'll just ask to use this one.
    I know one thing for sure - I won't be ending it with 'Your Sincerely'
    | Posted on 2004-10-20 00:00:00 | by Eggman | [ Reply to This ]
      that was definitely good...really..but I'm just wondering...what's behind that?you may feel secure not giving your trust away,but yuo'll probably miss one of the happiest experiences in life...seeing our trust rewarded.I perfectly know that doesn't happen often but ,in the end, all this world's good things are extremely rare.take life as an example...as long as I'm concerned,it only happens once
    | Posted on 2004-11-01 00:00:00 | by lanza13 | [ Reply to This ]



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