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    dots Submission Name: Passiondots
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    Author: drkpoet
    ASL Info:    21/m/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.04 - 442/527/94
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 445
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1192



    Description:
       Nothing more, nothing less, just writing to get it off my chest. comments, questions, concerns welcomed..


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    dotsPassiondots
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    i can't remember the time or place,
    or the deep expressions on your tender face.

    i've been looking for you for ages,
    your lookings helps to turn different pages.

    Pages that are covered in dust
    and stuck together from all loves hurtful crust.

    you don't know what you mean to me,
    but in my small world, your love sets me free.

    small cries i hear from your room,
    deadly cries of horrible doom.

    the hall seems longer than ever,
    seems as if i keep running to you forever.

    as i reach the room at which you stand,
    your mother standing by your side, holding your hand.

    "whats the matter babe?
    i'm here for you, i'm here to save."

    you gave me no look, and no resonse.
    what is this horror that continues to haunt?

    as i look deeper in the room,
    my deepest emotions, and my deepest fears, were suddenly consumed.

    my body laid silently on the floor,
    my life wasn't meant to be lived anymore.

    DrkPoet






    Submitted on 2004-10-18 20:30:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      as i look deeper in the room,
    my deepest emotions, and my deepest fears, were suddenly consumed.

    my body laid silently on the floor,
    my life wasn't meant to be lived anymore.

    this poem seemed like you were saying how much you loved someone and in the end you heard her screams and you ran to her but it was your body that laid on the floor...it was you she was screaming for
    | Posted on 2004-10-19 00:00:00 | by Brwnsknsam05 | [ Reply to This ]



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