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    dots Submission Name: Responsedots
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    Author: Ontlogicalamity
    ASL Info:    33/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    4.67 - 190/194/45
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
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    Bytes: 408



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       It's amazing how something can acquire so much power when it is addressed to you, especially by someone you care about very much.


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    dotsResponsedots
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    Have you ever found yourself sitting with someone,
    [Or across from a computer screen that connects you to someone,]
    Who has just completely made your day,
    and there are a zillion thoughts flying around your head,
    and they're all so wonderful,
    and you can't decide which ones to express,
    and so all you can do is sit
    With this stupid half-dazed grin?




    Submitted on 2004-10-21 00:57:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      LOL...It's true...The whole thing is true...I do that alot...Well, I have to say that your poems made my day...It's really short, but very well written, in form, and in the whole thong...Very good word choice...Thanx ...Hope to see more...
    | Posted on 2004-10-21 00:00:00 | by medicated | [ Reply to This ]
      whew...what was this.u said so much in so little.i do think in the same way n hav experienced it myself quite a lot of times...all i can say is i m impressed with ur work...great job.
    | Posted on 2004-10-21 00:00:00 | by aditya | [ Reply to This ]
      up until the other day it had seemed like forever since I felt that way, it really is a great feeling though...however looose all of the ands...PLEASE LOOOSE THE ANDS!I mean its like when you talk to some one and they like say like like all the damn time its really like annoying like dont you think. other wise I LIke the piece.-John
    | Posted on 2004-10-21 00:00:00 | by Mithrandir | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw, that's sweet. Yes, I have. That's how I converse with my honey since he's in England, and I'm in stupid South Carolina. We've blown each other enough webcam kisses to fill a hard drive with stills. I like this little salute to conteporary life.
    | Posted on 2004-10-21 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


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