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Temptation from the start
Deprivation in my heart
I don’t know why she’s his girl
My mind is spinning in a whirl
Of unchained thoughts and possibilities
Mapped out desires that are too real
Wrapped up feelings I shouldn’t feel
For he has always been my friend
More reason for me to defend
This crazed hunger for rationalities
He doesn’t treat her quite right
She doesn’t seem that bright
Receiving heartache and pain
Disbelieving sunshine when it rains
With angry blows and hostilities
Vile is his treatment to this sweetie
Bile is what he is to me
Learnt not to appreciate this gift
Burnt hot as my anger begins to shift
Towards change with probable casualties
Through idle eyes I stared
Grew the silent protest I bared
It seems as though fate is set
Fit, as I try to forget
These unchained thoughts and possibilities
Submitted on 2004-10-21 18:09:49
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I actually really liked this write, because I can relate to it so much.
Do you like this girl?
Good luck with the whole situation.
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