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    dots Submission Name: Speakin' Ofdots
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    Author: brain
    ASL Info:    28/m/Miami FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 27/37/12
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSpeakin' Ofdots
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    to release a steady stream of long continuous
    stuff, brain thoughts
    which are chiefly made,
    of the things which we love or maybe have lost,
    a memory perhaps, or it could be anything.
    it might even be a vision of your dad,
    or a notion of your once loved lady--
    you could sit and ponder any and everything

    living on a street in downtown Paris,
    you could think about that,
    or relax and contemplate, as you watch
    the television, about being a movie star
    and getting to ride in fancy limousines
    and awesomely built sports cars

    go to Egypt and eat the abundant fruit of royalty
    with the kings, and you could pretend
    that you were Tutankhamun,
    rich, with gold to no end






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