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    Author: Beast
    ASL Info:    24/ M/ Planet Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 232/133/28
    Words: 385
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Trapped
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       Have you ever felt like you’re being trapped...


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    Trapped: The Tunnel at the End of the Light

    Have you ever felt like you’re being trapped by the reality you live in, haunting you and choking you? Believe me when I say that it’s an awful feeling.

    But how can anybody be trapped in or by reality?! Usually reality is your way out, but what if reality becomes your enemy?! It’s a weird yet complex feeling that can’t be easily explained by mere words.

    The reality becomes a cage; restraining and crippling you by its endless limitations, and then hope becomes a luxury you can not have. And it seems that the only thing that might help you survive is your imagination. Not long you used to escape from your imaginations and fantasies by hanging on to the reality, you thought it’s your friend, you thought it will save you, but you find out that reality –over time- becomes the enemy.

    You gradually start feeling it getting to you, the loneliness becomes unbearable, imprisoned by reality, and all you can see is darkness, it gets so dark that you stop seeing anything at all, surrounded by endless void suffocating you steadily, but it won’t kill you, not yet anyway, not until you give in and give up on everything you ever loved or believed in. You find yourself walking in a dark endless tunnel, and then you suddenly you think that there should be light at the end of the tunnel, there always is, and you start looking around, and when you turn back you find out that it’s the other way around; because you already passed the light long time ago and now you’re in the tunnel at the end of the light…

    I’m not sure what can save us, someone once said “Love is gonna save us”, but I tend to disagree with that, I think it will take more than “love” to save us, I think our salvation lies in faith, then again it maybe just a little too late for us to be saved anyway.

    “Dwell in neither reality nor illusions, because neither will save you. And remember that hanging on to hope may help you survive, but hanging on to faith just might lead you to salvation”
    Yaser Hani







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      This is a subject i think a lot about and i agree that fantasy is the only way out of the reality. reality no longer is a safe place for some of us. so i love this and i am looking very much forward to more of your thoughts and writting!
    Take Care!
    Yours Jes!
    | Posted on 2004-10-22 00:00:00 | by Jesimine | [ Reply to This ]
      Reality can and is sometimes a very scarey place for some. Circumstances in our lives leave us vulnerable. Hope is but a dream. Faith?
    Faith in what? There is only one faith that could help us survive, and that would be faith in ourselves.

    Very well written, you obviously have deep convictions and an amazing ability to express them.
    | Posted on 2004-10-22 00:00:00 | by arkay | [ Reply to This ]
      I have definitely felt trapped before. The more you learn the more pointless reality becomes without faith. Hope is only temporary until you reach your goal. Great writting!
    | Posted on 2004-10-23 00:00:00 | by softspoken | [ Reply to This ]
      i always love reading people's random thoughts submissions ... you get a good view of the person behind the writing... not hidden by big words or an imagery overload that comes with a lot of poetry...i can definitely agree about being trapped in reality... that's why i sleep a lot.. though you're right about reality nor illusion being the way out... i think the only thing that can save us is true happiness... which is different for each person.. i always feel trapped by the monotony... the herds of people around me... do you mean faith in a higher being or faith in finding a solution?
    | Posted on 2004-10-24 00:00:00 | by besodemuerte | [ Reply to This ]
      We all felt "Trapped" before, it's a common thing in all humans (in my point of view), but if reality is no longer a safe place for us, then so is imagination, imagination can be more dangerous, because if you got trapped for a long time you may never find your way back, and this will definitely be the end, so my advice is dream, imagine, do whatever you want but come back to reality in the end before you lose your mind.
    | Posted on 2004-10-23 00:00:00 | by Yousef | [ Reply to This ]
      excellent job! i hate reality i rather sleep forever and live in my dream world and this one is going to be added to my favorites for one main reason. it relates to my quote "dreams are reality, and reality is just a [censored]ed up dream!"
    peace
    | Posted on 2004-10-28 00:00:00 | by chaos_flame | [ Reply to This ]
      The light at the end of the tunnel in more ways than one?
    I think making a border line between Fantasy and reality is too harsh!
    Dreams are our goals where would we be without our dreams, our motivation. To make our own reality is another point. So change or decide what is dreams and what is fantasy is a good move. Not leaving out the fantasies of course we need those too and they are so much fun! :)
    | Posted on 2004-10-31 00:00:00 | by Jess | [ Reply to This ]



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