Abstract poetry has always appealed to me,I wrote one a few years ago called "Flexible".This was really interesting, the image that appeared to me was much like an abstract painting you would see in a doctor office,or such place like that.This was good, I don't see much wrong with it. I enjoyed this quite a bit.
no your right. i don't understand it..maybe you could tell me the meaning behind it..i'd really like it if you did. i think it has something to with her dying, but i'm not sure..let me know if i'm right.
Ummm not quiet- 'The Day' is a metaphor I've made for fate and the future...so she is in 'grey veils' (vague and hidden from sight). I can see where you are coming from with the dying thing, but I suppose that's the problem with abstract poetry.