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    dots Submission Name: Silent Screamsdots

    Author: Kera
    ASL Info:    18-f-NH
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 116/129/29
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       my Journals says it.I cant really type it all over.

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    dotsSilent Screamsdots

    the loudest screams,
    are those not heard,
    for when pain is harsh,
    silence is deadly.

    cold metal ,
    tight around my wrists;
    iron bars,
    surrounding me, confining;
    quiet, cold, all alone.

    regret, not for what happened,
    but for what will happen.

    trust fell, emotions up,
    dissappointment to all.

    I am not sorry,
    not for what was done.

    the only way to know,
    is experience;
    I experienced.

    When I saw my parents
    those loud, silent screams
    filled the room.

    Submitted on 2004-10-23 06:30:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the loudest screams,
    are those not heard,
    for when pain is harsh,
    silence is deadly.

    ooh...deep. I like this one alot. I read it cuz my friend, alma-perdida, has a poem entitled the same thing...only it is about her father's lack of love for her, its pretty good. For when pain is harsh, silence is deadly...I loved that part the best. Its great...cant really think of all the words i need to describe my opinion of this one...but it was terrific:)

    | Posted on 2005-03-01 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]

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