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    Author: Abby Sinthetic
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 177/230/53
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       sort of skeptical of the human race, I guess


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    dotspeople?dots
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    Climb to the top of the pile
    step on who you have to
    When people pretend to be made of stone
    but they really are clay
    They seem to be so solid
    and you can't see through
    Know that they will step on you
    to get to where they have to.




    Submitted on 2004-10-23 16:09:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      skeptical yes but the human race seems to engender skepticism;) i'm sick of people myself but i don't know what to do about it besides [censored]:D good to see you writing again, about freaking time:P
    | Posted on 2004-10-23 00:00:00 | by joe quinn | [ Reply to This ]


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