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    dots Submission Name: In Novemberdots
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    Author: Raksha
    ASL Info:    16/female
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 75/67/29
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 315
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    dotsIn Novemberdots
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    We met a Sunday morning.
    Laughed and loved one another
    for a decade and a half.
    We were yet but nineteen before
    the disaster we weren't ready for,
    I wasn't ready for occured.
    You wrote me a letter
    Kissed it twice and sent it off.
    It alarmed me to meet you in November.
    I came that night and saw you.
    You lay upon the park's bench
    shaded in all black.
    Sleeping it would seem.
    I shock you twice
    but nothing stirred.
    Your skin was pale,
    I stroke your cheeks
    and chills came up my spine.
    You felt so cold,so distant, but loving and loved.
    I glared upon your lying body,
    a tear came rolling down my cheeks.
    I kissed you twice and sent you off.
    I told you then meet me in November.






    Submitted on 2004-10-23 18:29:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is sad. id like to know the background to it. its really deep and i can tell that a lot of emotion went into it. it will definitly go into my favs because it portrays an infinite sadness. ciao!
    | Posted on 2004-10-23 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't know you kind of confused me you talk about meeting in the future and the you talk about him in the past tense which are trying to focus on the present or the past
    | Posted on 2004-10-23 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]



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