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    dots Submission Name: The Nazis Would've Killed Jesusdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       Nazis were not atheists, well at least most weren't. Hitler professed himself a Catholic. The Catholic Church also signed an agreement with Hitler to not get involved in politics if they were left alone (click here http://www.jesusradicals.com/main/essays/nazis.html to see several pictures of Hitler smiling and shaking hands with Pius VII and other Catholics). Although the Nazis promoted the pagan German Faith movement as an alternative to Christianity, Hitler united all Protestant churches in Germany into the Reich Church. Many anti-Semetic Christians supported the Nazis because they considered Jews to be "Christ killers." Many soldiers and ordinary Germans who were sucked into Nazi ideology never renounced their Christian beliefs including many who killed Jews; therefore, there were Christian Nazis. I'm not a very religious person, but I hate hypocrisy.


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    The Nazis would have killed their own God.
    They would have filled his holy lungs with death,
    made soap with his fat,
    lamp shades with his skin,
    filled pillows with his hair.
    What hypocrisy
    to hate your own God
    to kill those like him
    to kill at all,
    but he was crucified two thousand years before
    they replaced him with a mustached wannabe savior,
    with the closest thing to Satan that any human could be
    JESUS WAS A JEW!
    JESUS WAS A JEW!
    JESUS WAS A JEW!
    They would have gassed him, too.







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      wow.. this is excellent. i never thought of it this way. this poem is such a huge eye opener.
    i live in a region of the world where hypocrisy is the norm.. people say one thing and do another and so i can understand your hatred or anger.. and it all comes through very vividly in this poem.

    really makes a person think.
    | Posted on 2004-08-01 00:00:00 | by girlinthephoto | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm..mixed emotions about this. Its definetly a good write, better than that. Its quite unordinary and you did it well. But I feel that this is more of a rant than a poem I guess thats the only down side to it if a downside at all. Good write.

    Bruno
    | Posted on 2004-08-18 00:00:00 | by brunov68 | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not sure about the structure here, no definite rhythm makes it feel disjointed and you should maybe think about some of the words you have used.

    "Moustached wanabe saviour" for example, isn't very imaginative and sounds clumsy.

    The piece as a whole gets your point across well, I really like the capitalization and repetition of JESUS WAS A JEW a real sense of strength and defiance here.

    Good job, just needs a little revision.
    | Posted on 2004-07-20 00:00:00 | by wilderness | [ Reply to This ]
      structure and the flow was a bit off, which was disappointing because I was really turned on by the topic. Very strong points made, but like I said, it just had a strange flow.
    | Posted on 2004-07-01 00:00:00 | by Casper | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW! this is straight up and powerful. its so shocking too. i cant help think of Sylvia Plath's poem Daddy as i read it. when you have "JESUS WAS A JEW"... it sounds kinda like a train chuffing... is that intentional or is it just a fluke? very bold write!
    | Posted on 2004-04-17 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      the poem was powerful enough by itself but your information in the description made it even more so.. although i do have to say that the flow wasnt as good as I have seen from some of your other poems.. but all in all i liked it
    | Posted on 2004-03-18 00:00:00 | by rocknpoetrychik | [ Reply to This ]
      quite powerful. i get the feeling that this just flowed from your pen from the hatred you spoke of for hypocrisy. it is also a frightening image because of the reality of it. thank you for this. it causes one to dig deep into those scary places that we don't want to see or feel.
    | Posted on 2004-03-16 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Hitler tried to establish "his" religion instead of the churches. but he couldn't prevent the people from going to church, especially after the war begun. not everybody was a nazi at that time. why haven't they done anything?? cause what would you do if you have to fear to get into a concentration camp if you do/say anything against it??
    anyway an interesting poem, short and to the point. wouldn't change anything.
    | Posted on 2004-03-09 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      of all the studying of the third reich that i have done i have never heard anyone say what you have just written in the way you did, very interesting write, short simple to the point,
    | Posted on 2004-03-09 00:00:00 | by brokenbatman | [ Reply to This ]


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