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Which Way To Go


Author: Yousef
ASL Info:    26/M/Egypt
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Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I really need to know which way to go!!


Which Way To Go



For the first time in my life I really don’t know
For the first time in my life I can’t find which way to go
I need to know should I follow my heart or should I follow my mind
Should I keep chasing this mirage or should I leave that past behind
Should I admit that being together was never meant to be?
Should I save all my love for someone who loves me?
Should I try with her one last time or should I leave
Should I fight for her or should I admit that getting to her heart is something I can’t achieve
But why should I try? While she doesn’t even care
Why am I torturing my self? That’s just not fair
I hear an echo in mind saying wake up man
Wake up from this dream and leave while you still can
Saying if you followed your heart you may lose it forever
But if I’m going to follow my heart then it’s either now or never
I hear the echo saying: leave, don’t stay
Leave and you might find a love that’s real one day
God I really need your help, I really need to know
I need to know what’s best for me; I need to know which way to go

Yousef Hani




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  hmm. love it. i found you have a style. same style as the other two i read.

Should I keep chasing this mirage or should I leave that past behind
Should I admit that being together was never meant to be?
Should I save all my love for someone who loves me?
Should I try with her one last time or should I leave
Should I fight for her or should I admit that getting to her heart is something I can’t achieve

its so depressing! reason why its so lovely. very emotional. especailly the last line. crying moment . hmm. seems like a song to me in a way. kind of. loved it.

-soomie
| Posted on 2005-03-27 00:00:00 | by poeticblindness | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow, you are really confused here. I understand this all to well and I my decision took awhile to make. I had a relationship with a guy once whom I loved dearly. He did love me back, but one day he went away. He came back awhile later and wanted to be with me again so we tried it and it didn't work. After I ended it I wanted him back, but I wasn't sure if we should ever be together because I knew deep down we were not meant to be. Needless to say I left well enough alone. I am glad I made the choice to stay away from him. We are different people in every way. I deserved better than him and I got it. I am happily married now. I have no regrets. I hope that helped you. I just started rambling, sorry. I really loved the emotion in your peice. I felt it all and related to it in a girls point of view. Great job!
*Amanda*
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by fortressofwords | [ Reply to This ]
  Hi this is a lovely poem I think everyone can relate to it.
Each one of us must have been in such situation once in our life.
To tell you the truth none can answer your questions you will have to answer them yourself and believe it doesn't matter which way you choose you will regret choosing it.
I really enjoyed reading your poem it just teached my heart.
with love shabnam
| Posted on 2004-11-16 00:00:00 | by shabnam | [ Reply to This ]
  need to know should I follow my heart or should I follow my mind
Should I keep chasing this mirage or should I leave that past behind
Should I admit that being together was never meant to be?
Should I save all my love for someone who loves me?


Those lines just made me want to sit there and cry, because I've felt that way so often that it's sad. Seriously. *Sighs* Beautiful incapture of true emotions
| Posted on 2004-11-16 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
  I can relate to this like NO OTHER. I think this might have even been written for me.
I loved the 2 lines:
Should I admit that being together was never meant to be?
Should I save all my love for someone who loves me?
Doesnt it suck when you love someone and they dont love you back?
Its so hard to move on.
Dont worry. Things will get better. I wish you luck.
-Andrya
| Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by andrya | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked it and i can also relate to it too, you did a very good job writing this and i like how it all flows together. i also like how you put the questions, it seems like it's questions you're asking yourself and i know i also do that myself, good job
| Posted on 2004-10-24 00:00:00 | by Lost My Love 4ever | [ Reply to This ]
  yeah its a great poem but i like the idea of spaceing it out so its easier to read i can relate to wondering weather to move on or keep chaseing something that hurt you because your in love ...
| Posted on 2004-10-24 00:00:00 | by blacktearz | [ Reply to This ]
  yeah its a great poem but i like the idea of spaceing it out so its easier to read i can relate to wondering weather to move on or keep chaseing something that hurt you because your in love ...
| Posted on 2004-10-24 00:00:00 | by blacktearz | [ Reply to This ]
  Well...I agree with (CeeVee), I think applying his suggestion would make it much better.

I think you should follow your mind, your heart will only lead you into trouble...your mind is rational so its desicions is usually wise...forget about her...move on...

Sometimes it doesn't matter who we love, rather than who loves us...remember that...

"Life is pain, get over it".
| Posted on 2004-10-29 00:00:00 | by Beast | [ Reply to This ]
  Well, I can relate perfectly to this, you have described my situation, as well as yours perfectly. For that, its going in my favourites but the situation is pretty hopeless don't you think? Have you had any help because all my friends keep trying to cheer me u but it doesn't work...
| Posted on 2004-10-24 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]
  very nicely done, but I think I would clean up many of the repititious lines, it would make this even better, I love the constant thinking and mental battles this depicts of one who yearns for true love...Bob:)
| Posted on 2004-10-24 00:00:00 | by poetryman | [ Reply to This ]


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