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    dots Submission Name: Mind's Zendots

    Author: Timmy S. Edgar
    ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263/200/71
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       This Poem is about a place i used to go to near a swimming hole in my home town of Cairns this place is a little known waterfall which only really the locals know about as you have to walk into it throught the rainforest for about an hour, when you get there it is a sheer waterfall which falls into a pool about 3 mtrs wide by about 6 mtrs long the climb to the top is very difficult yet when you make it to the top there is a rock which sits right at the edge of the falls and it splits the water in two as you look down all you can see is a tube of leafy green trees extremely beautiful and peaceful and this is the inspiration for this peice i hope you enjoy it.

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    dotsMind's Zendots

    When my time is spent, within the rainforest
    My minds in Zen, a special place where I can find
    Meditation from within, I place my mind in natureís florist
    See the beauty, if youíve been there youíll feel at ease and unwind

    Welcome to my peaceful life
    My love, my peace and harmony
    Youíre calm and relaxed, with no strife
    Itís my clarity, as the answers do come to me

    See itís my thinking place, a place that I call thought rock
    If my city life becomeís all jumbled up, with a need to reallocate
    It is this place, that giveís me direction and my mindís unblocked
    Come with me and you will too see mindís Zen start to instigate

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      Hello again Mr Timmy S Edgar... thank you for your comments... indeed thank you. Love this poem it contains a steady flow of serenity..... APPLAUSE !!!
    | Posted on 2008-11-17 00:00:00 | by col13x | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very peaceful and lovely. This is well-written.
    | Posted on 2004-03-09 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds like a nice place Tim. Good write, very thoughtful and serene.
    | Posted on 2004-03-09 00:00:00 | by DevilDinosaur | [ Reply to This ]
      this beautiful with fantastic imagery, nice flow and it is very well written.
    | Posted on 2004-03-09 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]

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