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    dots Submission Name: Every writedots

    Author: Vibrant
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 855/538/131
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsEvery writedots

    Each and every write
    is a delight.
    For one to say differently
    would stain
    thy sight.
    Each and every write
    is a fright.
    For one to say differently
    would shame
    thy sight.

    Submitted on 2004-10-25 11:20:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I gathered this was about writing but wasn't sure. I like short , sweet poems and the rhyme scheme & flow on this was good, it just made me wonder what it was about.
    Love, Peace, Joy!!!
    | Posted on 2004-10-25 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm. let me see You should approach every write with a positive attittude lest it colors your judement, but every write you read has something that can be improved, and to think otherwise would make the reader less than perceptive.
    Now it takes some digging to get this message and some of your readers will be clueless to get any message, but will enjoy the form and rhyme. some of the word usage seems a bit outdated (stained, thy), but it works for your overall message.
    | Posted on 2004-10-25 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't really understand this but then I do. I know this isn't what you were talking about but sometimes if I write really, really from the heart, it almost scares me that I'm putting too much of myself into the poems, right there so that whoever wants to can go in there and read my soul. . . as if someone is laying my innermost thoughts out on an operating table. . . guess that would be the fright aspect of writing. Great job!
    | Posted on 2004-10-25 00:00:00 | by secret moon | [ Reply to This ]

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