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    dots Submission Name: Wheredots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 914
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       I've been out of work & had a drink or 2 and the depression just sets in. Love, Peace, Joy!!!

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    Where does the wind come from
    & where does it go?
    Is life for real
    or is it a show?
    Where does the wind come from
    & where does it go?
    Am I unique
    or just your average Joe?
    Is life worth it
    I may never know.

    Submitted on 2004-10-25 17:42:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A bit depressing, but that sense of hope is still inside of this writting, and I like that, without hope we would have nothing, do I not stand correctly. I like your poetry, it really brings hope and a light inside of my world. Your words flow very well inside of eachother, and your selection that you use to write, well is original, sorry, I don't want my comments to all sound the same. I read it twice. I was confused what was your average Joe though? Help me out Im a bit confused
    | Posted on 2007-03-26 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it...its too depressive for me, i normally write dark thigs but not this dark and depressive...well good job anyways...no offense... byebye
    | Posted on 2004-11-13 00:00:00 | by anita_89 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is cute, A little depressing, but cute. It is a very nice read, that flows very well. It kind of rolled off the tongue. I can't think of much else to say, other than I did like this.

    PS- I'm sorry for the generic comment. It's all I could think of right now.

    | Posted on 2004-10-25 00:00:00 | by Lightbringer | [ Reply to This ]
      short, yet very a meaningful poem. im sure many have thought this to themselves, but its true what Up-N-Aroused said, you have friends out there that care, who cares if life is a show, as long as you find some joy in it, its okay. anyways good write
    | Posted on 2004-10-25 00:00:00 | by nameless child | [ Reply to This ]
      No, I mean the type you do in gym. physical activity lifts the spirits, so this is the prescription. Nothing wrong poetically speaking, but I won't return to reread, too depressing.
    | Posted on 2004-10-26 00:00:00 | by Lelik | [ Reply to This ]

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