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    dots Submission Name: The Hooddots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 655
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 394



    Description:
       Just a quick piece about how my day started when I went to work with my dad & the hood blew off of his 1970 van! Good think Great Spirit watches over us!
    Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsThe Hooddots
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    Riding down the road in the 70 van
    darn hood flys off like the top of a can
    All I could say was, "what the hell was that?"
    Scared me more than a Halloween cat
    Luckily no one was near or behind
    The hood wasn't damaged still one of a kind
    So that's the story of a bad starting day
    This poem is done I've got no more to say




    Submitted on 2004-10-27 16:17:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A good chuckle is good medicine.. Thank you for this poem. It's enjoyable, and the rhyming adds to the charm. Capitalize "darn" in the second line and it'll be darn near perfect..lol
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-03-13 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Thys was so very cute. I could just see the look on your face when it happened- jump~ ha-ha! Oh my, that’s silly. My Jeep did that once. Okay, goodnight~
    -#6~
    | Posted on 2004-11-07 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]
      Very lucky, indeed! Every day you hear horror stories about freak accidents that kill and maim people and ruin their lives...refreshing to hear of a time that nothing bad happened...no harm, no foul, and an endearing memory...
    | Posted on 2004-10-27 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]
      i like your poem it's funny. And i'm happy that no one or nothing was harmed. Good poem keep writing. i usually don't read poems that short, but the way you wrote it was good.
    | Posted on 2004-10-27 00:00:00 | by Charlenee | [ Reply to This ]
      I had a hood pop open once on an old 56 Chevy, scared the crap out of me. Well I've got no more to say either, good-bye.
    See ya on the board soon.
    | Posted on 2004-10-28 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
      HA! Hell of a wakeup call, eh? Happened to me and my ex-bro-in-law in a 78 Cutlass. Luckily the gap left between the bottom of the hood and the engine compartment was enough to peek through. Nice, short and sweet and great imagery. I could imagine the look on both your faces...hee-hee. Glad no one was hurt as well...whew! Talk atcha later and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2004-10-28 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Feeling evil, so I gave your pome a once over with the homonymic wand. Here's the result:

    Thistlewood

    “Rye ding-dong” ‘s their ode in the 70 van.
    Darn good fly-soft, lick the spot if you can.
    Wall-a-kid savours, "Swat the yellow-ass hat!"
    Scar-eyed memory, then a hollow ink cat.
    Lack a limo. One wasp near for the find;
    a wood wasp - it damned still, won off. A kind
    so fat is the theory; half a bed’s tart in hay.
    This pome is dun. Hive got gnome ore - touché!

    Nidder doo-eye...
    | Posted on 2004-10-29 00:00:00 | by Lelik | [ Reply to This ]


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