Eyes Filled with many tears left uncried
for the one i lost
the person that took my heart and soul
to keep as her own
to teach me a lesson
that as long as my heart and soul are gone
the longer my pain shall last
til i give up on my hate towards the ones i call family
but i shall not feel til the only person that made sense
in my life is back on earth to relieve me of this pain
and to answer all my unspoken questions
about the identies of the ones that betrayed our love
but my expectations are set high for you
as yours are for me
i expect you to never change
u expect the best of me and to overcome the pressures of life and the ones put on me by you and god
but you never told me that it would be this damn hard to prove my self
i expect you to always be with me as my courage
and to never let me fall
and yet all you want is for me to prove that i am ready to receive that diploma in my hand
and to never take you for granted
but the day i took you for granted was the very same day that Grandpa J.R and Mikey took your
hand and told you that your place in heaven was ready
But see i dont blame them for loving you so much that they couldnt bare another second without by their side
im just mad becauze they took you when i needed you the most and leaving me here on earth with Mary
as my punishment for taking you for granted
and now that im on my own i realize that
its jus me against the world
and that my life will never be the same if GrandMa Bess aint in it tellin everyone to
"Kiss MY Ass"
"In Godz World Nothing Happens By Mistake"
your grandmother sounds like a great women and a strong women and i know she meant alot to you and the more we talk i see shes were you get your strength from and in the end i know your a strong women and i hope you keep me around long enough to see just how strong you get.
I think this is a very well written poem. This is an excellent tribute to your grandmother, and a very clear portrayal of how you feel now. If you'd like a bit of advise on life from a stranger, I suggest you make Grandma proud and let go of the anger. I know that isn't easy, and that family is NOT dictated by blood, but it's the best way to heal. Also remember that your grandmother is always with you, looking out for you.
I found one mistake in the 8'th line from the bottom (not counting the line that only says to). You left out a word in this line. Other than that, very good write.
I often wonder why we are so angry when those closest to our hearts pass on? I am like you I hold a grudge with the dead. I hope that in time you will learn to let go of some of your anger and find the peace I'm sure your Grandma would want.
Well this brings up a good point but the thing is when someone dies close to them some people commit suicide and that i don't know why but don't grieve for to long other wise it might get to your head i'm not saying dont be sad or mad but don't let one thing bring you down cause a bumpy road will eventually turn smooth