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    dots Submission Name: goodbyedots
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    Author: chaos_flame
    ASL Info:    24/m/ky
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 46/79/25
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    i think im going insane
    with these thoughts in my brain
    god i hate all this pain
    and your the one that i should blame
    but yet you try to give me your shame
    now your bullshit just sounds lame

    yet im tore apart inside
    because im stuck in this bind
    without you by my side
    these thoughts of you in my mind
    make me want to run and hide
    to a place no one can find

    you rip out what was left of my heart
    took it in your hands and tore it apart
    was that your plan from the start
    i cant blame you it was my fault
    for being the fool and playing the part

    you said you loved me and that was a lie
    i hate you now and you wonder why
    because of you i have no tears to cry
    i just sit and wait for days to pass by
    sometimes i wish you would die
    just remember youre the one who said goodbye




    Submitted on 2004-10-28 22:09:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awww..how sad...man, i have got so many that say that...is this written from...experience? those are always the best ones..
    | Posted on 2004-11-03 00:00:00 | by alma-perdida | [ Reply to This ]
      when in doubt blame some one else. maybe not in this case but its a good way to vent. I liked it keep it up. kacey


    P.S. happy halloween. keep up the good work, cant wait to hear from you again.
    | Posted on 2004-10-28 00:00:00 | by Lachesis | [ Reply to This ]



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