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    dots Submission Name: His onedots
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    Author: Maki
    ASL Info:    17/ female/ home
    Elite Ratio:    5.06 - 208/209/68
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 388
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 827



    Description:
       A love poem... that he still hasn't seen.. 6


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    dotsHis onedots
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    So hard a secret to keep
    When all you do is think
    Of such a perfect person
    No one can capture in ink

    How radiant this being can be
    So easy on the eyes
    That seized me so breathlessly
    Who won’t let go despise

    The time of day
    Nor the month of year
    No matter what it is
    He will constantly be near

    To comfort in me
    A very special thought
    Of being truly his
    Because there is not

    A person more
    Who could tempt him to be theirs
    So truthful do we stand
    There’s no one who can share

    The feeling so strong,
    The love of us two young,
    Will never cease because
    The simplicity of one

    Steady heart beat between the two.




    Submitted on 2004-10-29 00:15:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A very nice poem. you really are very talented to write such a good poem with 15.
    Now to your poem it is well written and it his a flow the last stanza is the best for me.
    It is the perfect ending for the poem.
    good work keep it up.
    with love shabnma
    | Posted on 2004-10-29 00:00:00 | by shabnam | [ Reply to This ]



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