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    dots Submission Name: .:Small:.dots

    Author: Timmy S. Edgar
    ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263/200/71
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Prose/Comedy
    Total Views: 1171
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       This quirky lil piece just came from nowhere oneday Lol i think it is nice

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    This is a poem
    About nothing, itís ok
    I know where it is going.
    Itís not long
    Itís short
    Itís not tall
    Just small
    Thatís all

    Here is another lil ditty.... a hidden bonus track
    Kiss Me

    Kiss Me
    Said She
    Who Me!
    Said He
    As she pleads
    Oh Yes Please!
    For Me

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      Short and good write. Not really focused, but it might just be. I did like your poem though. Much enjoyed. The world's a critic, but you must do what you like. Only then are you truly succesful.

    | Posted on 2006-04-29 00:00:00 | by Soph | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Timmy--LOL I think this is cool, a poem about nothing,,right now i have enough material to write 12 volumes of "Nothing"..but I couldn't do it this well, Thanks, Silver
    | Posted on 2004-03-10 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very cute and pleasant. I like that the poem is about nothing outside of itself, if that makes sense.
    | Posted on 2004-03-10 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      cool I liked that you wrote a poem about writing a poem that is small, I did that only it was about writing a poem that had no T's in it and no one got it accept one guy. good job!
    | Posted on 2004-03-10 00:00:00 | by hidden lady | [ Reply to This ]

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