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Author: Timmy S. Edgar
ASL Info:    38 male Melb, Australia
Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 263 /200 /71
Words: 122
Class/Type: Prose /Comedy
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This quirky lil piece just came from nowhere oneday Lol i think it is nice


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This is a poem
About nothing, it’s ok
I know where it is going.
It’s not long
It’s short
It’s not tall
Just small
That’s all



Here is another lil ditty.... a hidden bonus track
Kiss Me


Kiss Me
Timmy
Said She
Who Me!
Said He
As she pleads
Oh Yes Please!
For Me
Yummy!




Submitted on 2004-03-09 23:20:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Short and good write. Not really focused, but it might just be. I did like your poem though. Much enjoyed. The world's a critic, but you must do what you like. Only then are you truly succesful.

Soph
| Posted on 2006-04-29 00:00:00 | by Soph | [ Reply to This ]
  Hi Timmy--LOL I think this is cool, a poem about nothing,,right now i have enough material to write 12 volumes of "Nothing"..but I couldn't do it this well, Thanks, Silver
| Posted on 2004-03-10 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
  This is very cute and pleasant. I like that the poem is about nothing outside of itself, if that makes sense.
| Posted on 2004-03-10 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
  cool I liked that you wrote a poem about writing a poem that is small, I did that only it was about writing a poem that had no T's in it and no one got it accept one guy. good job!
| Posted on 2004-03-10 00:00:00 | by hidden lady | [ Reply to This ]


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