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    dots Submission Name: One Eye Opendots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I was just playing with words here. I'm not trying to make a religious statement at all.

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    dotsOne Eye Opendots

    God sleeps with one eye open,
    one shines in the day,
    the other at night.
    One day the skies
    will become one
    will become a mirror
    to reflect what God sees
    and he will awake.

    Submitted on 2004-03-10 02:15:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very insightful short piece you have mastered once again.... almost has an english language feel of a greek mythology... good one keep it up
    | Posted on 2004-03-10 00:00:00 | by Crash | [ Reply to This ]
      Ohhhhh! I like this, what a lovely little gem of a thought. Thanks, Silver
    | Posted on 2004-03-10 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]

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