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    Author: Anju
    ASL Info:    25/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 24/27/15
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    I see the deep breach
    In the hearts of my pals
    When with love they reach
    For the words of comfort.
    I reach for those hearts
    With pain held in mine
    Which stings so hard
    And stays all life.

    Parting with you is as hard to me
    As stabbing myself to a dreadful death.
    Bidding you bye is more to me,like-
    Running a knife through my heart-your Home.
    The same hard fret,I found in your eyes,
    The one I had kept for you,my friend;
    None then did need to utter a word
    Instead the eyes spoke it all.

    That moment then stood in shoulder with me
    Which came to take my friend away;
    Like a wind that blows two flowers apart
    I saw her being blown away from me.
    I set my hand in a rhythmic sway
    With tears in my eyes and her autograph-
    "Time and space can't part us both ,
    For now we abode in each other's heart."




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      I love the part where you say it was like the wind that blows two flowers about, but it's so sad. I think similes like this make a poem much more interesting. This poem was beautifully written. Goodbyes are always the saddest things to deal with.
    | Posted on 2004-10-31 00:00:00 | by w0rdz_0f_wizd0m | [ Reply to This ]


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