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    dots Submission Name: A Crazy Feelingdots
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    Author: w0rdz_0f_wizd0m
    ASL Info:    19-female-Missouri
    Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 113/138/33
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1162
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       A simple poem describing the feeling I had about an experience with someone I was falling for, who also happened to be involved with my best friend..it almost became a silent competition between the two of us.


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    dotsA Crazy Feelingdots
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    It's an empty feeling
    Because you're in it all alone
    It's a hopeful feeling
    Because you're waiting by the phone
    It's an unforgettable feeling
    Because it's all you think of
    It's a scary feeling
    Because you're afraid to fall in love
    It's a stressful feeling
    Because your nerves stay shot
    It's a sickening feeling
    Because your stomach's in a knot
    It's a painful feeling
    Because it hurts to breathe
    It's a revengeful feeling
    Because you feel deceived
    It's a happy feeling
    Because a smile's on your face
    It's an angry feeling
    Because someone's in your place
    It's a greedy feeling
    Because you want him to yourself
    It's an envious feeling
    Because you're compared to someone else
    It's a doubtful feeling
    Because you don't trust your heart
    It's a frustrating feeling
    Because it all falls apart
    It's a pitiful feeling
    Because you watch and you weep
    It's a woeful feeling
    Because you cry yourself to sleep
    It's a disappointing feeling
    Because you've been let down
    It's a regretful feeling
    Because it's too late to turn around
    It's an undescribable feeling
    Because you're at a loss for words to say
    It's a crazy feeling
    Because you've never felt this way




    Submitted on 2004-10-31 19:59:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      really thought this was a great piece, the format its in, the description and impact it carries, its a very thoughtful poem. the feeling you describe in the poem, its very true, very heartfelt, this poem was written for yourself, more than anything, and in that sense, it is appreciated even more by someone like myself, who is reading it.

    tony
    | Posted on 2005-04-03 00:00:00 | by nwproud | [ Reply to This ]
      I kno that saying it’s “very awesome” is hardly a review but… Well, it IS very awesome. I loved the rhythm and format and idea. Plus the feeling behind it. When you can feel it- it makes it all the more a true poem…
    | Posted on 2004-11-02 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow... I gotta say this is the best way I've heard love been described ever! You mention all the possible ways love can affect you, and I gotta say I've felt all of them. Good job making a poem which people can relate to and you should take pride for that. Ok, back to your poem. The technique you used here is really good because it makes the poem easy to read. It makes the flow run smoothly and still maintaining the meaning of the poem as a whole. Personally, I found it to be extraordinary. The last two lines basically summed up what it really is to be in love... a crazy feeling (believe me, it is).
    It's a crazy feeling
    Because you've never felt this way

    Beautiful.. congrats! It now is a part of my favorites!

    margui
    | Posted on 2004-10-31 00:00:00 | by margui | [ Reply to This ]


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