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    dots Submission Name: optimisticdots
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    Author: Abby Sinthetic
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 177/230/53
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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    Description:
       I felt a surge of optimism.


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    dotsoptimisticdots
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    I see the light at the end of the tunnel
    I feel the sun from the bright outside
    Hope surges in me and my heart is full
    Motivation like the tide
    I walk and the ground moves with me
    I breath and the air is as my saviour
    My mind is open, my heart is free




    Submitted on 2004-10-31 22:37:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      YAY FOR YOU! seriously... yay! when one has hope one needs very little else...i very hope your optimism hangs round a while... makes itself at home and that your world spins well for the longest time... good luck with everything and good write!
    | Posted on 2004-10-31 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      what are you doing writing optimism for! you're a teen remember? :P just kidding:D optimism is good, no matter what you always have to believe in tomorrow..even if it sounds cheesy..cheese is good anyway so yeah;)
    | Posted on 2004-11-01 00:00:00 | by joe quinn | [ Reply to This ]


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