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    dots Submission Name: Anger, Sorrow, Suicide.dots
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    Author: metalman_21
    ASL Info:    17/m/NE
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 30/42/17
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    Description:
       It's been a hard time for me. Parents have gone on a power hungry rampage, and i'm stuck on lock down. Time for some writing.


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    dotsAnger, Sorrow, Suicide.dots
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    Some people think,
    I have the perfect life.
    But what these people can’t see,
    Is the bloodstained switchblade knife.
    The wooden pipe under my mattress,
    THC residue.
    All the writings,
    From these hands that would frighten even you.
    All the screaming,
    Bitching, bleeding.
    There’s no way out but death.
    As the blade falls to the ground,
    I draw my last breath.
    Memories of family,
    And friends that I once knew,
    Everyone has changed so much.
    What else could I do?
    There’s no more room,
    For the fat kid that tries,
    To be everyone’s friend.
    There’s no use trying to hide from something,
    Murderous in the end.
    Sanity is fiction.
    Death is all but fake.
    As I leave these mortal world,
    These words I will take.
    “Cherish not the face of death,
    but embrace the light.
    All the good times that we share,
    Are what needs held tight.”





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