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    dots Submission Name: Love of Perfectiondots
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    Author: Jimma
    ASL Info:    22/m/Melb Aust
    Elite Ratio:    4.75 - 217/234/54
    Words: 414
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       Clearly i wasn't in really good place when i wrote this. Same old teenage longing angsty style emotion which every person thinks is worse than anything anyone else has ever felt before.


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    dotsLove of Perfectiondots
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    With every tear
    I die a thousand deaths
    The pain of a million broken hearts

    How can eyes that feel such joy
    At the mere sight of her
    Well such pain in her honour?

    Such perfection can bring only bliss
    Or emotional torment
    Sadly the latter plagues me

    I gaze skyward
    Not to evoke some holy divinity
    But to find something that compares
    To the extent of my longing

    How far would I have to go
    To make her see
    That without her I am nothing?
    Just a shuddering mass of useless flesh

    How many times would I have to die
    In her name
    Protecting her
    Unknown to her
    Unsuspected
    Before she will revive me?

    What storms?
    What tests of faith must I endure
    In my quest for her
    Before I am rewarded the prize?

    How many more heartbeats
    Coursing pure heartache through my being
    Must I calmly bear
    To secure a place in her temple?

    With each swing of the cutting pendulum
    My leaden heart grows heavier
    Dragging me to my knees
    Before the goddess of my heart
    To exalt my beloved angel

    How many acts of devotion
    Must I submit to
    In admiration of her angelic graces
    Before she will grant me a place
    At the table of her emotion?

    The pain of fruitless adoration
    Of freedom tasted but turturously ripped away
    The pivot upon which my future is hinged
    Speaks a resoundingly certian "Maybe"

    I have weathered the tempest of doubt in her
    And now I stand in the midst
    Of the drought of my longing for her
    And yet my parched throat rasps still
    Extolling her praise

    What demons must I exorcise from my life
    Before my heart can be considered pure enough
    To kneel before the altar
    Of the one I deify and idolize

    She is the one who I adore
    More than life itself
    I cherish the chance to worship her
    And delight in passionate adulation of her name
    And yet sustain no hope
    Of finding freedom
    In her life-giving embrace

    My reverent head bowed
    And respectful eyes lowered
    Paying homage to my potential saviour
    There is no treasure I wouldn't sacrifice
    To feel the compassion
    To bask in the love
    Of which I know she is possessed

    And yet I wait for her
    To cast her holy eyes upon me
    To reward my devotion
    With a whispered promise
    Of a future paradise.




    Submitted on 2004-11-01 06:20:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      My Fav Part
    How far would I have to go
    To make her see
    That without her I am nothing?
    Just a shuddering mass of useless flesh

    How many times would I have to die
    In her name
    Protecting her
    Unknown to her
    Unsuspected
    Before she will revive me?
    good job!
    | Posted on 2004-11-01 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]


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