Description: This isn't a very strong come back, but hey it's a come back none-the-less! Enjoy! It's about hearing voices... not like actuall voices, but the voices of reason, passion, memories, lessons that have long since been instilled inside out souls.... those kind of voices. And someone is desparatley struggling to get to the raw form of theirselves where they have none of these voices driving them in different directions.
Not the only one -------------------------------------------
I'm the only one
who knows that
I'm not the only one in my mind.
There are forces beyone my voice
that tell me who I am and what to be.
I can't control them,
I wish I could.
I wish I had a voice of my own.
But I'm not the only voice in my mind.
I very stark statement on the human condition. We all have the voice or voices. I attribute them to past incarnations trying to help us not to make the same mistakes over again. Others might just call it a conscience (?) anyway I liked the briefness and honesty. Nice work
so are we all, gratz on the poem, i like it in its simlisity, i cant spell, anyways i would like to see more of this so i will go look, your really do write well.
this is very good and i think you wrote something that most people can relate to in some way or another. there are just a dew spelling errors but i write them a lot too so im not going to say its a bad thing lol but i really liked it because it was simple and very well written keep up the good work
Submission Name: Not the only one
