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    dots Submission Name: sex at seventeendots
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    Author: poetsoul
    ASL Info:    17/f/cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 109/151/32
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 344
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       im not speaking for every seventeen yearold but tis is what its like from my eyes and experience. enjoy reading it....or dont.


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    dotssex at seventeendots
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    my favorite place in the world,
    is your bed.
    when i lay next to you,
    no words are said.
    i thought it was because you loved me to much to speak, how nieve was i?
    we lay there, high on eachother.
    eachtime going a little further, a little deeper inside.
    i bite my hand to keep from being so loud,
    it doesnt work
    it feels to good.
    so i just give in,
    and grab your hand to push it harder,
    faster...
    i want to scream your name,
    but im to insecure.
    people could hear.
    you dont love me,
    and somehow i dont care.




    Submitted on 2004-11-01 15:15:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This ripped me apart, the forbidden passion, forsaken passion. i want you to read something that i posted along time ago, can you pm your email?
    | Posted on 2004-11-17 00:00:00 | by Trystam | [ Reply to This ]
      wow...this captured my experience to a tee. well, my first enjoyable experience. My actual one was barely sex. lol. But anywho, the poem was great. I love how you discribe hodling back your passion. It was truely great. I look forward to reading more.
    ~jane
    | Posted on 2004-12-04 00:00:00 | by Jane Lost | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmm, this was a very nice piece. I think it captured MOST teenage males and females views on teen sex. Ect. This was a very good piece, detailed, and I could relate. Good job.
    | Posted on 2004-11-01 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      Hardtimes. I disagree about it capturing most teens views on sex tho. Hell, I remember my first time I was stupidly in love (or at least well on my way). But then again, looking back at it I wish I hadn't cared. Ultimately there were far more important couplings than the one distinguished only because it happened first...
    shard
    | Posted on 2004-11-01 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]



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