Description: This is just something that I wrote on a whim. I was actually trying to write my bio for my page but I guess I got kinda carried away. Tell me what you think.
my introduction -------------------------------------------
I once was a child
in body and mind
but over the years
one was left behind.
My body grew up
and I had to go out
into the cold world
to figure things out.
My mind tagged along
getting my body in trouble;
I still love ice cream
and blowing spit bubbles.
The words always grabbed me
and forced me to write
they drove me insane
if I put up a fight.
So at heart I embraced them
and forged them with pride
they knocked at the door
and I let them inside.
They forged me as swiftly
as I could shape them.
I changed ever so slightly
with every stroke of the pen.
My thought started making
more sense by the day
but I still love to frolic
I still love to play.
I think I've grown up
but I'll let you decide.
If you have any questions
I have nothing to hide.
I like this Did you end up using it as your bio. I'll have to check. There aren't many rhyming poets left these days, and it's always a treat to see them.
It's a cute piece. I liked the storyline and can relate it to myself over the years, as I think most people can.
My favorite verse:
They forged me as swiftly as I could shape them. I changed ever so slightly with every stroke of the pen.
Nicely written introduction, and I must say, it is my sincere pleasure to meet you -SS
Who says you HAVE to grow up. Cant you still be a kid at heart. Hell if I ain't. But his is a good writing. I dont know anyone who is not a little kiddish at heart. Keep it up. Kacey P.S. call kayla a raddish(Zia) shell hate it but it will get her back. Kacey
Submission Name: my introduction
Did you end up using it as your bio. I'll have to check.
shell hate it but it will get her back.