I can see why this has so many comments! This is very beautiful. Beautiful in everyway. The words were beautiful, the imagery, the power in it. Just beautiful. I love this line, "In that forgotten field of fallen snow..." It just flows so naturally and the love is expressed wonderfully because of that. Excellent job. -blt
'Though we were both breathless deep inside.' Wow. That line was amazing, I really liked that. 'We held magic in our fingertips And we both called it love.' - That was a bit iffy, that second line seemed a tad short in comparison. Overall it was a heart-warming poem. The sense of comfort and happiness was empowering.
I really liked the descriptive words and they were clear enough that I actually had the picture of two dead lovers. It wasnt a depressing message either. I like the incorporation of heaven and angels in your poem too, it really added to the flavor. Keep it up!
I like it. Although I dont like winter, this makes me like it a little bit. Now I want to go sledding or something, HA! Great words put together to create a warm feeling from something that is purely cold. But I guess that is what love does, doesnt it? Always a warm blanket feeling.
YUM! this is gorgeous! i love this... how unconventional it seems to be with most identifying winter with doom and gloom and blues and yet here you go writing about the coldest day of winter and making it gorgeous... making me jealous it couldnt be me having angels sing me home... im LOVING the third stanza most of all! [h a l l e l u j a h] is a gorgeous look too... i can almost hear the angels sing... yyuuuuuuum!