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    dots Submission Name: Idioversesdots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This poem is inspired by one of my favorite terms in Deconstructionist literary criticism and culture theory. It refers to the privare "universe" that we all have.

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    I deconstruct myself,
    and I see that I have
    my own atmosphere, my own seas,
    a thousand lands inside of my mind--
    my own world.
    Others orbit with me
    around a shifting center,
    each person--a different sphere.
    We each have, each are
    the centers of
    our own universes
    our own idioverses.

    Submitted on 2004-03-11 01:39:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Interesting... id or ego? Or both? I like it. "No man is an island..." but we can certainly try to be. <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-23 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      Great display of our own green and selfishness.... nice, short and to the point, but what I like most of all, is the things I can apply this to, on this very site... well done keep it up
    | Posted on 2004-03-11 00:00:00 | by Crash | [ Reply to This ]
      This was hmmm how would I say it...I cant find the word right off but it was good and I really liked it
    | Posted on 2004-03-11 00:00:00 | by TastemyTears | [ Reply to This ]
      a very good take on egocentricity..or sumthin..masters of our own destiny..
    | Posted on 2004-03-11 00:00:00 | by Krucible | [ Reply to This ]

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