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    dots Submission Name: Writer's Block Sets Indots
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    Author: eener
    ASL Info:    21/f/wi
    Elite Ratio:    5.55 - 351/370/53
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       You know that snowy fuzz on the TV screen when the reception is bad?? that TV = my brain at this current moment in time. argh...
    This also might explain why I haven't written much lately.


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    dotsWriter's Block Sets Indots
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    This dreaded disease has invaded my brain.
    Nevermore do great ideas transform without pain.
    Connection between pen and paper broken,
    Inable to write down opinions I have spoken.

    The wheels deep inside have ceased their turning,
    In spite of all the deep thoughts still churning.
    So many feelings I strongly wish to voice,
    but the blinding fog within won't give me that choice!

    Hopefully this disability will soon disappear
    So my mind can once again become clear.
    Until then I will spend multitudes of time,
    Cranking out one more cheesy rhyme.




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      I hate writer's block. It's like the worst feeling in the world, apart from hunger. Have you ever tried staring at a blank white computer monitor in front of you with nothing there but that stupid blinking cursor that taunts you. Writer's block makes you feel so stupid. I know the feeling.
    | Posted on 2005-01-30 00:00:00 | by Lady Tragedy | [ Reply to This ]
      Thank you for your comment on "Writer's Block Sets In". I thought writing about it would make it go away, since all I was concentrating on was the fact that for some reason I couldn't concentrate. But I think writing about it work, because I just wrote another one that I'll be submitting soon! Yay!
    | Posted on 2004-11-03 00:00:00 | by eener | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm sooo jealous... I've been wanting to write a poem ABOUT writer's block since I HAVE it, but nothing would ever come out. Apparently your block is over cuz this wuz great. Oddly, alot of my poems come to me in the bath/shower, so I just have to repeat the lines I think up over and over until I can run to my room and write them down. Did you need to know all that?
    | Posted on 2004-11-03 00:00:00 | by WaxingPoetic | [ Reply to This ]
      i know exactly what you are talking about. i have writer's right now too and its a pain, i feel like everything i write is bad, but i liked the poem and the subject that you wrote about i hope you get unblocked soon good luck
    | Posted on 2004-11-03 00:00:00 | by Lost My Love 4ever | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm i've never had writers block,i wish it was because i am such a good writer he he,at least i'll be able to recognize it now:)
    | Posted on 2004-11-03 00:00:00 | by poetsoul | [ Reply to This ]
      i can relate. writer's block is the worst. i thought that it was good. the rhyming was well placed and it was easy to read. i hope that your writer's block disappears soon. good luck. keep at it.
    | Posted on 2004-11-03 00:00:00 | by maquiladora | [ Reply to This ]
      Renee,
    We all go through times when the words are not flowing. for me, it's usually when I'm stressed. Try writing other things- journals, forum posts, general thoughts, or ideas. it helps get the brain back on track.
    jan
    | Posted on 2004-11-03 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      This made me smile...I know how frustrating writer's block can be...its evil I tell you. PURE EVIL! But it will pass. I've found that it helps to just write anyway, even if it sucks. Just write whatever is is your head, this usually helps calm my writer's block. Much love. <3
    | Posted on 2004-11-03 00:00:00 | by Juliets_dagger | [ Reply to This ]


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