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    dots Submission Name: Grungedots
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    Author: Drizzt
    ASL Info:    18/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 141/154/32
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       Looked at my CD collection and realized how much grunge rock I listen to... Guess I'm just stuck in the 90s.
    -drizzt


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    dotsGrungedots
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    Nirvana's deep simplicity fills the air
    To be followed by Pearl Jam in all their glory
    The song "Black" never fails to move me

    The mellow strumming of an acoustic
    STP song haunts my thoughts
    As I reach for the Bush CD

    Puddle of Mudd quickly replaces it
    After "Everything Zen" is played four times
    Because sex and violence are what fuel rock 'n roll

    I mellow out to the music...
    Reach for the gun...
    Kurt Cobain sings one last line...




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      Not bad but the vague reference to suicide is a little much don’t you thank o and one good turn deserves a another so I do have to thank you for you help JOEBOT
    | Posted on 2004-11-09 00:00:00 | by Joebot | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting write...made me guess a bit at the end. I don't normally go for the dark type of writing, but this one was good. Seemed very simple and one tracked, not necessarily a bad thing.
    | Posted on 2004-11-03 00:00:00 | by JG | [ Reply to This ]
      Great right.. Although i dont listen to grunge much.. i like acid rock and the such more... unlike JG i dont think that this was much of a dark poem but again good right none the less.

    -firebreed
    | Posted on 2004-11-07 00:00:00 | by Firebreed | [ Reply to This ]
      kurt cobain was the greatest. i still listen to him. i don't listen to grunge much anymore, but it still listen to nirvana. i think that pearl jam and bush have both gone downhill in the recent years. i liked it. it's a good ode to grunge. the last line was good, "kurt cobain sings one last line..." it was unfortunate. keep it up.
    | Posted on 2004-11-03 00:00:00 | by maquiladora | [ Reply to This ]
      hell yes, grunge was the [censored]. i love this point, and i love the inspiration. i love that you brought it up- good thought.
    | Posted on 2004-11-03 00:00:00 | by TechnoticQ | [ Reply to This ]



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