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    dots Submission Name: Sleepseeingdots
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    Author: EternitysLyre
    ASL Info:    20/M/Taiwan.
    Elite Ratio:    7.13 - 151/168/42
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 425
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 851



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    dotsSleepseeingdots
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    Quietly, gingerly, breathlessly

    Tiptoe past the hands
    The drugged,
    stalking seconds finally forgotten
    Thumping in fear of waking them up



    Stealthily, covertly, silently;
    Muffled dins of excavation,
    Concealed in fervent keepsakes
    Flickering slightly to the gleam of once-bright eyes


    Weakly, paradoxically, gently
    Cradling found memories gone gold
    King Midas' touch tainted by the tendrils of time

    Life, leeched out and turned cold
    Heavy in hands
    Shackled to reality


    Forgetting, awaking...

    Tick-tock tick-tock tick-tock....


    [...as if] life goes on.




    Submitted on 2004-11-04 04:52:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Reminds me of Poe for some reason.
    Very interesting metaphors.
    Liked the title immensely.
    :)
    But I didn't really get the poem...
    I'll be happy if you could explain.
    Thanks.
    | Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]



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