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    dots Submission Name: God-Citydots
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    Author: the apocrypha
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 185/192/48
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Inspired by Cliver Barker's Imajica...


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    dotsGod-Citydots
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    Distorted lines
    Contours of a distant city
    Knots of tangled highways and sines
    So crippled that they deserve my pity

    Step up, little and humble man
    To untie the routine in this land
    Built on beliefs and religions
    Forgotten and locked in time
    Intricately flirting with the passions
    In the bondage fetish of the human mind

    Oh highways of love and avenues of lies
    Today so amazed by the impossible size
    Of this construction process
    Half accomplished and half exessed

    Love, loving the hearts
    Of those forever trapped in
    The city of God, the city of the Unseen




    Submitted on 2004-11-04 10:57:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thys is the stuff that crack laced dreams are lyned with… Your works are ultra-violent and raw. Sweet! I'm working on reading the 2nd column...
    | Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm...I'm not sure what to think of this yet...I love the way it was written and I'd love to read "Imajica" so that I might see where you derived the inspiration from...but I see no flaws in this piece at this point. Great job.
    | Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by Juliets_dagger | [ Reply to This ]


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