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Author: the apocrypha
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Inspired by Cliver Barker's Imajica...


Distorted lines
Contours of a distant city
Knots of tangled highways and sines
So crippled that they deserve my pity

Step up, little and humble man
To untie the routine in this land
Built on beliefs and religions
Forgotten and locked in time
Intricately flirting with the passions
In the bondage fetish of the human mind

Oh highways of love and avenues of lies
Today so amazed by the impossible size
Of this construction process
Half accomplished and half exessed

Love, loving the hearts
Of those forever trapped in
The city of God, the city of the Unseen

Submitted on 2004-11-04 10:57:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Thys is the stuff that crack laced dreams are lyned with… Your works are ultra-violent and raw. Sweet! I'm working on reading the 2nd column...
| Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]
  Hmm...I'm not sure what to think of this yet...I love the way it was written and I'd love to read "Imajica" so that I might see where you derived the inspiration from...but I see no flaws in this piece at this point. Great job.
| Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by Juliets_dagger | [ Reply to This ]

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