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    dots Submission Name: Good byedots
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    Author: Akai_Ame
    Elite Ratio:    4.79 - 223/180/46
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 316
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       i just wanted to say something to a friend of mine...he is always there when i need him. :D


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    dotsGood byedots
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    Thinking over what he said,
    Maybe it's true
    But that's what i dread,
    So i'm saying good-bye to you.

    The hell-hole? I won't go back there!
    And i know just what to do.
    I don't think he'd care,
    So i'm only saying good-bye to you.

    They know how THEY treated me,
    Yet they don't care.
    On a plane is where i'll be,
    Flying through the air.

    This is my last time,
    I'll see the light of day.
    So I must say to what's mine.
    All i ask is remember me, okay?

    My life is sad
    That i will not miss, nor should i care.
    But i'm oh so glad
    That you were always there.




    Submitted on 2004-11-04 18:51:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don't know why you dislike this so. I think it is rather good. I can't say that it is something that gives you a warm feeling when you read it, but it certainly does bring certain emotions to the surface. It was powerful when you felt the emotion that was sewn into the words. I still think it was a good write, though you may disagree. -Kenji
    | Posted on 2004-11-06 00:00:00 | by Kenji Light | [ Reply to This ]
      So i'm sayign good-bye to you.

    There is a slight misspelling in this sentance, If you are anything like me, your fingers just lost their way. LOl, I do that quite often. I really liked this though.
    | Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by curiosityskitty | [ Reply to This ]
      break up are always sad but if they misstreat you it maybe for the better live life to fullest
    and be happy
    I love your poem
    | Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]



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