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    dots Submission Name: Come with me-reviseddots
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    Author: curiosityskitty
    ASL Info:    30/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 145/149/30
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 347
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 585



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    dotsCome with me-reviseddots
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    Come place your heart in my hands,
    I値l shelter your battered soul.
    Come rest your weary eyes,
    I値l fill the lifeless hole.

    Come and love with me,
    Your tears I値l wipe away.
    Put you above all others,
    Your trust I won稚 betray.

    Come let me console you,
    I値l hold you close to me.
    Come place your heart in my hands,
    Together we値l be free.

    With hearts entwined in lovers bliss,
    Our souls will be as one.
    Pasts behind we move ahead,
    Our lives have just begun.




    Submitted on 2004-11-04 21:30:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm glad you added some because I probably wouldn't have read it! It's really pretty. It made me smile.
    | Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by Laveina | [ Reply to This ]
      I didnt read the origional, but from the way it sounds, the longer version was very complete.
    I really liked it!
    I wish there was someone who I trusted that much. To give my heart away and tell them to look after it!
    good work
    -Andrya
    | Posted on 2004-11-04 00:00:00 | by andrya | [ Reply to This ]



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