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    dots Submission Name: Frail Ideasdots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFrail Ideasdots

    One hundred ideas
    try to spring from my mind at once.
    The frail ones are trampled in the rush.

    Submitted on 2004-11-05 06:12:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I've never tried to verbalize this feeling before, but you have placed it on paper for me. Seems that after the drought there are always all these ideas that surface at once and so few seem to make a strong enough impression to recall them even moments later. Thanks for this one,
    | Posted on 2004-11-05 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this, Darwin would be proud of you. But I don't think he would understand the current trend in activity "survival of the most obnoxious." I can relate,
    I have a serious case of inequality between brain wave and pen stroke ratio. Thanks for being our resident sage and sharing.
    | Posted on 2004-11-05 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      all those frail poems that could be, we oughta have a wake for them... i could relate to what Learah wrote in her comment about losing something you had when more powerful thoughts come your way... bummer...
    | Posted on 2004-11-05 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      leaves me wanting more. I'm not saying you should add something. I'm saying that it puts interesting and vivid images in my mind. maybe I'll write more. could be (if I get these damn theoretical texts about Literature out off my mind).
    | Posted on 2004-11-05 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      I do that alot, I try to write things down so I don't forget, then the seemingly unimportant ones that I push to the back are forgotten by the time I get to them. AADD?
    | Posted on 2004-11-05 00:00:00 | by curiosityskitty | [ Reply to This ]
      who hasnt felt like this some times? i love the way you present the problem here. a spidery view of things i would think, and i always apreciate that kind of perspective. inventive, but simple, it really gets your point across in an elegant way. keep up the good work, and good write.
    | Posted on 2004-11-05 00:00:00 | by TechnoticQ | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmmmm! I guess we can relate to this. Along with the frail, some very good ideas have gone that route. We need a playback button to rewind our minds.
    | Posted on 2004-11-05 00:00:00 | by arkay | [ Reply to This ]
      Weird. I was kinda thinking, bleh, why actually post a poem like this... but then was thinking. So many times I've started a poem and gotten about half way, before the ideas start flowing too fast, I'll have a really good line, and then what I think is better, but it changes the construction, so I go back over it, and then another idea comes and I ditch the last one... but I lose sight of what the first really good idea was.

    So you've written a litany for all the zombie, half-dead poems out there, ruined by a poetic, inspirational flood.
    | Posted on 2004-11-05 00:00:00 | by Learah | [ Reply to This ]
      lol! I like this. I have the same problem [not close to 100, but the same problem]. write fast! ;-)

    [computer says i need more words...]
    | Posted on 2004-11-05 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]

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