hmmm..short and sweet are many of your poems...just like the author. "Liquid amber" makes me think of blood..."Burning red" makes me think of someone who is angry. Maybe you were angry at someone when you wrote this or maybe the leaf you saw pissed you off...HA! I liked it.
I think this should have been a little longer. And add more colors and description. I personally think this is a good format and start. I love fall so I just had to read this, but you did leave me hanging a little. :) -blt
I personally liked it. Ive always wanted to see a REAL fall. One with beautiful colors. I live somewhere where the seasons are winter, winter, summer, winter. We kinda skip the spring and fall. The leaves turn awfully quick, and they are normally just yellow. Its pretty for all of 2 days. AND THEN it snows. haha. Good work -Andrya