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    dots Submission Name: Sunday Ramblingdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Passion
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       Just rarmling...Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsSunday Ramblingdots
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    I relish in the Sunday and the season; enjoying a good book Ishmael An Adventure Of The Mind & Spirit and having a nice toke/smoke letting my mind absorbe the environment and the story.
    Truly Sundays should offer all of us the opportunity to pick up one of our poetic teaching manuscripts. Books, poetry, Shakespeare, Emerson.
    To look out into the lansdcape and feel glorified by all the color and how fortunate you are afforded this time.
    I sat watching traffic start to back up and I look into the cars; some are smiling, some look stressed, some have no look of life at all. I wonder about all these sorts of people & dream of faraway cultures. How it all kind of blends with Ishmael and the tale of the Leavers & Takers.
    KFC and Michelob for late lunch - load of laundry - perhaps a nap.




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      Thanks for sharing your thoughts on a Sunday and bringing us, the reader into a moment of your life. You write out your thoughts well, in a poetic sort of way. I agree with turn back..it makes one feel cozy while reading it. Take Care.
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-03-13 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      nice little rambling thought on a beautiful Sunday. i enjoy Sundays, too, and take the time to do some reading and writing or just lolling around. the books sounds interesting. perhaps i will check it out! enjoy your Sunday! have a swig of Michelob for me!
    | Posted on 2004-11-14 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      rambling thought always intigue me.
    i wonder about people and their train of thought
    how one thought leads to another
    how in my mind certain things link up while other people make no connection at all.
    yet this all makes sense to me.
    And wondering... people in their cars... what might they be smiling about? just got laid on a sunday morning perhaps.
    | Posted on 2004-11-07 00:00:00 | by Martine | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem is so relaxing...i just got home and was all pissed off and cranky but when i read this i just felt so relaxed...i love the kfc, beer laundry and nap at the end...this is wonderful!

    r~
    | Posted on 2004-11-07 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]
      it makes me just want to curl up on a cozy couch and read a book and go to sleep...it has a sort of thomas kinkade aura about it if that makes sense
    | Posted on 2004-11-07 00:00:00 | by turn back | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool! I hear ya. I hear ya. I was working all day today and it was absolutly beautiful outside...sucks, for real. All I wanted to do was go home, pick up my kids and take a drive, maybe go to the park, but NOOO! I had to be stuck inside only able to dream about the outside. The way you tell it though, you can ramble all day about stuff like that. I don't mind at all.
    | Posted on 2004-11-07 00:00:00 | by TigerzLady2 | [ Reply to This ]


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