I disagree with the common thought of you sounding like a pirate. From my point of view you are telling the story of first lust, using old english, such as you would hear from a vampire if you were to ever meet one. I am fond of this, and as of right now it is the only poem on my favorites list.
Sounded like a Pirate that was inlove with blood, lol. I used to cut myself, just to see the crimson colour, and to smell its sweet scent, and to taste that sweet taste...Ok I am sorry I was dreaming about it...see now I love it...My AIM SNs have to do with blood, and so does my Yahoo, and MSN. Lol I really love it. but you already knew that Nice Pirate talk though...I would have thought that you were one, if I already didnt think that your werent one. If that makes sence...aww nice talkin to yah bout yer blood...
[censored]in. the whole pirate efect is weird but funny. and if used in the right voice scary. i liked the title but i wanted killing. there was some but i dont believe killing one person can fullfill blodlust. i liked it nonetheless.
quite vampiric.. blood is rather intoxicating in it's own way.. though in this case, it was like looking straight through the eyes of one plauged by it.. i was almost expecting to hear of the taste being pacified.. somewhat dissappointing, though i admit it was interesting.. Adam
hmmm...well what inspired this? sounds like a pirate wrote this...you've been watching p of the c huh?! well whatever tickles your pickle i guess. and why arent you in school?! im really getting tired of this. havent you already seen that those damn doctors arent going to do anything for you?!
That is incredible, simply said. I fancy your use of archaic words or is more old English rather? It's not an easy task considering what epoch we live in. I could sense the obviousness of craving the narrator had for blood; it's so strong, and vivid. mmm also made me thirsty for tomato juice rofl, just kidding. Wonderful write. Take care.