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    dots Submission Name: Kill The Beastdots
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    Author: DarkenedSoul
    ASL Info:    30/m/astral dreams
    Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 77/60/17
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 343
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Sometimes burying your hatred and sorrows can create an alter ego within you.To a certain extant thats what this is about.However some will garner the deeper meaning that lies unveiled within its lines.


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    dotsKill The Beastdots
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    The beast has grown strong,
    his anger and rage I can barely contain.
    I feel his lust for the hunt, for the chase,
    for the scent of heart pounding fear,
    for the taste of innocent blood,
    and the thrill of a savage kill.
    For what he thinks is victory... and revenge.
    What should have been one,
    I unwittingly made two.
    To him I gave my pain, my rage, my savageness!
    Who is stronger now?
    I do not know.
    How do I conquer the beast.. that I've created?
    Someone tell me.
    Someone help me!
    Build the circle,
    call the watcher,
    summon the guardians,
    bind me with runes of ash, blood, and salt.
    Imprison the beast!
    Taste of death,
    I am free!




    Submitted on 2004-11-08 13:08:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This one I really like
    I wish people would realize how truly easy it is to throw away the negative and only welcome the Positive into ones Life
    Its all about ones outlook
    As I always say there is a positive to every negative
    Very Nice Work
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      things=thinks, I think. lol

    I like the idea here...As to the question, I'm not sure how to kill the beast...I think the beast is in each of us, and to kill it would be killing the body of dark emotions- and I sometimes think we need the beast to nurture the our perception.

    I especially liked this part and thought it was the strongest within the piece:
    Build the circle,
    call the watcher,
    summon the guardians,
    bind me with runes of ash, blood, and salt.

    punctuation seems good, as well as grammar- just need tt change that one spelling error and you'r good to go!

    Thanks for sharing this
    -SS
    | Posted on 2004-11-08 00:00:00 | by Stalking Sylvia | [ Reply to This ]
      *sticks out her lip* wah... when i opened this, i thought it would be about Beauty and The Beast!... There's a song in the movie called Kill The Beast. *sigh* Anyhow, it's still a pretty fu<king cool poem. I get the impression of lycanthropy... Or a very serious rage problem. Anger Management, anyone? :) I also like the comparative allusions or dare I say reverse personification (animalication?) to/of you as an animal. Very nice, and very eloquent. *md*
    | Posted on 2004-12-03 00:00:00 | by MerryDeath | [ Reply to This ]



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