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    dots Submission Name: Don't Worry Let me Falldots
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    Author: Mithrandir
    ASL Info:    28/m/N.Y.
    Elite Ratio:    4.62 - 452/681/113
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 738
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    Description:
       So more or less I posted this for me, I wrote it after reading the lyrics to a get up kids song called I'll Catch You. I don't know why I felt the need to write it I guess it goes along with this haze I have been walking in. I dont know anymore. One day maybe I will understand, but for now I shall try to dream again and without fear.


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    dotsDon't Worry Let me Falldots
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    No I can't sleep
    when sound burns my ears
    Theres a storm Brewing
    building up for years

    I'm left alone with my fears
    This man is trembling
    the bloods left his hands
    He walks alone
    Blind and ignorant
    Nothing matters anymore

    Let the rain fall

    Feel the wind
    Like a ghost of yesterday

    Let it carry me

    Take me across the sea
    To a home once warm
    and a life so carefree

    And if I should fall
    Don't worry
    I'll find my way home


    Some Day...




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      Beautiful, this is one for all the bad days that you just wont to shun the world I like it and the flow isn't bad either Keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2004-11-09 00:00:00 | by Joebot | [ Reply to This ]
      Forgotten Feather...reminds me of the
    "Golden Feather"...the way I felt when I was lost and thought I would never find my way home...

    In the autumn night
    when there's no wind blowin'
    I could hear the stars falling in the dark
    When you find what's worth keeping
    with a breath of kindness
    Blow the rest away...
    By Robbie Robertson...

    I must say along with the rest that have commented...I feel like weeping...but the beautiful blue in the sky so clear reminds me this is just another dream and the voice of all that can come with time...is stonger then any tear to grace my face...which I would give to you in a heart beat.
    Thanks for this one...love remembering
    Kelly
    | Posted on 2004-11-09 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
      john...i love this purely because it comes of so honest and sad...i keep wanting to call you johnny...lol...not sure why...though..sounds to me like maybe your lost in life...your not sure how your feeling and your not sure where your going...but then it seems your ok with it...and your saying dont worry because eventually i'll find my way home...in life in love..purps
    | Posted on 2004-11-08 00:00:00 | by purplesun24 | [ Reply to This ]
      i wanted to cry when i read the intro to this
    i love you you know that
    despite that
    this is amazing
    it flows really really well
    its a step back towards what i remeber you writing which is nice
    i LOVE love love the ending 'and should i fall dont worry ill find my way home some day'
    id be light house if it would help you your mine ::kisses::
    | Posted on 2004-11-08 00:00:00 | by scorpio sphinx | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this. I have felt like this so many times the past few months. This just spoke volumes to me and the title itself just...grabs you and pulls you in. I really like this piece. Good write.
    | Posted on 2004-11-08 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      i love this, and i love the get up kids (mostly their old stuff)...i really like the stucture of ur poem-it just seemed to flow better...i'm sure lots can relate to this...everyone has felt alone, or been a "loner" at one point in their lives...and hopefully most of them will find "their home"
    | Posted on 2004-11-08 00:00:00 | by brokenmirror | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved how this presented itself both with content and with flow down the page. I've been for too long in the shadows but I've decided no more - buck up; find beauty after you've felt the pain. We all have purpose this I truly believe. Good job! Live, Love, Laugh!
    | Posted on 2004-11-08 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      the true epic tale of a loner, many times we go through life thinking we need no one, but in all reality we need everyone...I loved this and have been there many times, may all your journeys be safe and filled with friends along the way, nicely done...Bob:)
    | Posted on 2004-11-08 00:00:00 | by poetryman | [ Reply to This ]


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