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    dots Submission Name: LORDS OF EARTHdots

    Author: Anju
    ASL Info:    25/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 24/27/15
    Words: 316
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsLORDS OF EARTHdots

    Forms of life I see around,
    I see around in varied forms;
    I see the dogs and cows on land
    I see the horse and deers and hogs.

    Birds fly high and Don the sky
    And the fish swims deep and rules its World;
    Nature here sinks in utter glory
    Thyself set swaying to the notes of harmony.

    But these are mere subjects
    To the Lords of Earth,
    As it is claimed
    By men themselves.

    Him they call Hindu,And
    Him they call Muslim,
    And Christians and Sikhs
    Too stand beside them.

    Who is a Christian?And who an Islam?
    Show me the difference in their make and look;
    His blood bears colours of green or blue?
    Or his ears are three,and noses two?

    Gods this day stand face to face
    Ready to kick off a brand new fight.
    Bloodshed and cries splay around
    By the names of religion,day by day.

    But Hey!"Wise men",as you call thyself,
    Just pause a moment
    To stop and watch,thy great "subjects"-
    The fish 'n' bird and nature itself;

    Learn from them the discipline of life
    The unity shown,though in diversity
    We see no bloodshed,and no violence
    Among those lives that differ a lot.

    The crow is nurtured and cared all day
    With undiffered feelings of love,in gay
    By the cuckoo at nest
    Where her children rest.

    But man today has reached a stage
    Where his flesh and blood is torn to pieces
    By his own hands,with no regrets
    And mind now filled with sole vices.

    The Lords of Earth can still be revived
    And the throne shall shine with glory more
    If dirts of minds are washed away
    To leave back men,just pure humans;

    Then do I see a new world there,
    With nature that dances
    To the tune of harmony
    Rising from the hearts of the "Lords of Earth"

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      that was a good poem,and I totally agree with you.religions were born to help people,god was supposed to be a kind of support during all life,but nowadays it's all confused,and what was meant to solve is becoming more and more a problem.I've lost my god and maybe I miss him,but I'm not worshipping anything in whose name people die.if there must be a war it won't be in my name.
    | Posted on 2004-11-11 00:00:00 | by lanza13 | [ Reply to This ]

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